Louise Cusack

Daughter of the Dark 

Fantasy Fiction

Publisher: Simon & Schuster Australia

Paperback 352 pp

Date of Release: June 2002

ISBN:  0731810600

 

Interview by Cherie Murphy

June 2002

 
 

Shadow Through Time 2: Daughter of The Dark

In the second novel of the Shadow Through Time trilogy, Khatrene's baby daughter Glimmer is sent through the watery gateway into exile on Earth.  Her guardian Pagan must quickly adapt to Earth customs and use his wits and powers to protect Glimmer from detection, hiding the evidence of her true destiny. But the Maelstrom is building momentum, threatening to obliterate the four worlds and all who inhabit them. Eventually Glimmer must return to the land of her birth and fight the fiercest battle of her young life to right the terrible wrongs of the past, defeat the enemies who threaten to destroy her and restore peace to the four worlds.

Once again, Louise Cusack weaves an intricate web of intrigue, magic, erotica and horror to create a tale that is pure fantasy.

 

 

In June last year, talented Brisbane author Louise Cusack dazzled us with her first fantasy novel, Destiny of the Light, Book I of the “Shadow Through Time” trilogy.

 

Now, the magic, romance, adventure and intrigue continues with Daughter of the Dark

 

Louise, your enthusiastic readers have waited nearly a year to read Book II of your Shadow through Time trilogy. Was it harder or easier to write the second book?


 

A lot easier, in fact. I already knew the characters and was emotionally invested in their stories, so it was just a matter of taking up the plot where I'd left off in book one, which meant no time was wasted on character development or world-building. Although, having said that, the Airworld of Atheyre and the Fireworld of Haddash, which were only touched on in book one, are settings in Daughter of The Dark so consequently they needed to be fleshed out and made 'real'.


 

Have you always wanted to write fantasy and how hard was it to get published? 


 

I've always been a sci-fi fan with a penchant for love stories, so I haven't always wanted to write fantasy. However, now that I've done it I think I'm hooked! I've long been a lover of fairy tales and children's stories, and fantasy lends itself so beautifully to those themes. Destiny of The Light is really Alice in Wonderland for grownups. Daughter of The Dark follows in a similar vein, although this time it's a male character thrust into the 'stranger in a strange land' scenario - a champion from Ennae stranded on our earth. His awkwardness made for some funny and touching situations.


 

As to how hard it was to get published in the first place, I have a wonderful agent, Selwa Anthony who arranged the sale of the trilogy - my first book sale. I had been with Selwa for five years at the time and had completed quite a few projects, although none of the books had sold. Still, that early work proved that I could write and finish a novel (very important when you're selling a trilogy and have only written book one), and it also helped hone my skills as a writer. I'd always known I would write my little princess story one day, but I didn't dive into that first up. I wanted to be skilled before I attempted it. When the time was right, I did. And it sold straight away.


 

Many would-be writers think the greatest challenge in getting published is finishing the manuscript, but what do you do once you hand the book over to your publisher?


 

My experience is that you heave a small sigh of relief, maybe take a week off, then get on with book two and write like crazy because within a couple of months you'll get book one back from the structural editor. Destiny of The Light came back with post it notes all over the manuscript and a detailed nine-page report on what needed to be fixed. I put in three months of very long hours (I must be learning - the second book was much quicker) then dived back into book two and only stopped when the line edit for Destiny arrived a couple of months further on. I went over all the marks the editor had made on the manuscript (changes on every page) to decide whether I agreed with them or not. Mostly I did. Sometimes I could see what the editor wanted but her changes didn't sound right to me. I work by 'ear' and how the flow of the sentences sound, rather than by strict grammatical rules, so sometimes I'd change her editing to rectify the problem but in my own words. Once the line edit was completed I posted it away and got stuck back into book two. Closer to the publication date I saw artwork for the Destiny cover and then the page proofs came for me to check (at the same time a copy editor was checking them as well). I made last minute corrections and pointed out any typos - not much room for change at that point - then sent it back.

 


The next thing I got was my advance copy and let me tell you, you are definitely allowed to take the whole weekend off and curl up in bed reading that, reminding yourself of what a great story you've written and how everyone is going to adore it. After all the hard work, you will definitely have earned it!


 

Is the Shadow through Time trilogy “the book” you have always wanted to write? 


 

Absolutely. I've had this story running through my mind since I was quite small, probably 7 or 8. Alice in Wonderland was my favourite book as a child, so I would lose myself in this fantasy where I was a little princess who had been exiled on earth (doesn't every little girl think she's a princess). In this fantasy I would return to my real homeworld to search for my missing brother - an angelic twin who was loving and kind and who never teased me, unlike my real brother at the time. As I grew older the story became richer, the details more solid. As a teenager I had crushes, and so the Champion with his unrequited love for the princess entered the plot. I matured and the characters themselves became more complex and realistic. By the time I was ready to write it they were real to me. They still are.


 

When you started writing Destiny, did you have all three books set out in your mind, or has the story evolved with each page? 


 

When I started writing Destiny I didn't even realise that Khatrene would have a child, let alone that it would be a special child whose destiny it was to join the Four Worlds. That came later. All I knew at the start of writing Destiny was that Khatrene would find her twin, she would be deceived and betrayed but would eventually find love.


 

My characters are real to me and although I have a strong idea of what they need to do (their motivations), I don't really have any idea of what they will actually do, or what problems they'll come up against. I only seem to discover that as I go along. Often I'll be typing something and thinking "Jeez, who would have thought that would happen!" In some respects it's scary to work without a detailed plot, like a trapeze without a net, but I have a low threshold of boredom. I like to discover things at the same time as the character. It does mean a little more rewriting at the end, but it's never dull.


 

As to plotting the whole series, by the time I was at the end of Destiny, I had a rough idea of the main thread - Glimmer's destiny to join the Four Worlds, but I still have no idea how that will be resolved and I'm 30,000 words from the end of the final book, Glimmer in the Maelstrom. My writing friends think I'm crazy, but I just know it will all work itself out. It always does. You just need faith in yourself and the process.


 

Does it make it difficult when one book is published and you can’t change “the past”? 


 

Oh yeah. In fact, I'd love to write the whole trilogy in draft next time. But from a professional point of view, I'd like to keep putting out a book a year, so that's a bit of wishful thinking. This series has been quite complicated with 15 or so main characters and four linked worlds that move at different times. It would be great if I could say, "Next series I'll just make the story simpler" but because I don't 'make' the story, it makes itself, that's never going to work. My characters must love that old Chinese curse, to 'live in interesting times!'


 

Your second book is entitled Daughter of the Dark but there are two daughters of the Dark. Who is the heroine in this book and what is her role? 


 

There are parallel stories in book two - what's happening here on Magoria (earth) with Pagan and Glimmer, then what's happening to Lae in Ennae. The link is their love for each other and their desire to be reunited. I don't want to give away the ending, but I will say that it's not a repeat of book one. Not that I set out to make it different - although that's a good idea, to make sure readers don't get too comfortable with your style or you'll be stuck in a narrow slot - but it just worked out that way. As I might have said before, the characters will do what they want to do, not what I hope or want them to do.


 

Regarding the title, there's a very good reason why book two is not called DaughterS of The Dark, but to find that out you'll just have to read book three.


 

When I read Destiny, I fell in love with its heroine Khatrene because of her vulnerabilities and her brave resignation to being thrust into a world so different to Magoria, our Earth world where she was sent for protection. But Khatrene is often kept on a pedestal, protected by her Guardian. Is Lae a stronger character and will this show out in the second book? 


 

You're right, Khatrene was protected because she was The Light who must not die, but she rebelled against the 'cotton wool' treatment. Luckily for her in Destiny she was only unprotected for a short period of time and she managed to weather that. Unfortunately Lae, for the majority of book two, has no champion at all and she suffers! You really get to learn what she's made of and how resilient she is in the face of some pretty terrible circumstances. I don't think that mentally she's any stronger than Khatrene, it's just that she gets more opportunities to rely on her own resources.


 

I have to admit: my favourite part of Destiny was, Talis, Khatrene’s Guardian. I mean, wasn’t he “to die for”?! Pagan, your leading man in Daughter of The Dark, is a character that we have already came to know and love in Destiny but can he match Talis for courage, honour and strength? 


 

And then some! I think there's something really exciting about a rogue turned hero. Pagan's Guardian training provided him with the power to heal and protect, and even before he was given the responsibility of guarding Khatrene's child he showed he would risk his life to defend what he believed in. He was just an idiot with women, totally arrogant and basically had no ideas past sex. Now he's in love so he's a born-again romantic, but there's still this lovely unpredictable edge about him. You know, those sort of men who seem outwardly conventional but you're never quite sure if they'll do what they're told.


 

At the end of Destiny, Talis and Khatrene escape to the Airworld, Atheyre. Do they return as characters in Daughter of the Dark and what role do they play in the coming of The Catalyst? 


 

Talis and Khatrene aren't actively involved in Glimmer's life but their subplot is more subtle and insidious (remember Khatrene's brother Mihale is still with them) and they have an active role at the end of the novel.


 

Who is your favourite character in your trilogy?


 

That's hard. I think I have a favourite in each book. For Destiny of The Light it would have to be Pagan. Because he was such a pratt, he was fun to write.


In Daughter of the Dark, I really loved writing Sarah McGuire. She's the funeral home owner who finds Pagan and Glimmer when they first arrive on Magoria (our earth). Sarah is such a delightful contradiction of bolshie independence and very endearing vulnerability - just the sort of woman you'd want for a friend and the perfect foil for Pagan's insecurity and arrogance.


 

In book three, Glimmer in the Maelstrom, I adore Petra, whom you won't meet until that book comes out. Again she's a Magorian (earth) character who simply walked into a scene one day, quite unexpectedly, yet was perfect in every detail and so very real it was actually frightening, as if I'd caught someone astral travelling and dragged them into my story.


 

How do you make your characters so deep, so real? Do you model them on real-life people or do they spring from your imagination? How much of “you” is in each of your characters? 


 

I think I've just hit on it in the previous question. I don't 'make them up', they come to me fully formed. They just turn up in my mind and it's not until they start moving and talking in the scene that I discover things about them.


 

In a crucial scene from Destiny of The Light where Khatrene is about to realise she loves Talis, Pagan tells her how Talis's mother died, and even as I typed in the details I was gobsmacked. It explained so much about Talis's character and why he was so protective of Khatrene. I'd had no idea. That's how it happens for me. The characters just do their thing and I write it down. I do make decisions about which scene to write next and whose story I'm following in it, also whose viewpoint I'm writing the scene in, but after that they just drag me along.


 

Many of us have read Destiny, some of us many times, but can new readers enjoy Daughter of the Dark without finding it confusing, as with some other second books in trilogies? 


 

I hate a lot of 'set up' at the start of books (that low threshold of boredom again) and wads of explanation as you go, so I was determined not to do that. However, I did need to feed some details in during the course of the novel so that those who were new to the series, or had read Destiny 12 months ago and needed a reminder, wouldn't be lost. Even then, my editor felt I needed an initial piece to set the scene. A prologue. Luckily for me, Breehan is the Storyteller of the Plainsman, and as I had to introduce his little band of runaways early in the novel, it was an easy matter to have him tell his young charges a story from their near-past. That served the dual purpose of setting up the start of book two and introducing a new character for book three. The Plainsmen children are so mischievous it was delightful to write, and hopefully will be delightful to read.


 

What makes the Shadow through Time series so special? 


 

When I read a book, what makes it special for me is when the characters have a life outside the story - beyond what I've read on the page. If I can imagine them talking and eating and sleeping, making love and fighting battles, whatever, then they have become real to me. That's what I look for in a book. Frank Herbert's Dune series did that for me when I was a teenager, and I've been wanting to do that for other people ever since.


 

Not long after Destiny came out I got an email from a reader who said 'your characters are so real I feel like I could look over my shoulder and see them.' I just cried. I've had lots of similar letters since then and every one is immensely satisfying. To bring a fictional character to life has to be a writer's greatest gift.


 

What do you plan to do when you finish your trilogy? Can we expect another fantasy feast in a couple of years’ time? 


 

I'm already working on themes and ideas for my next fantasy trilogy and will say at this point that I want to base it on a fairy tale, but again with a grown-up twist. I like the idea of the cross-culture experience, where people from our world go to another or visa versa. So perhaps there might be an element of that in the story if I don't feel I've explored it to death already!


 

 

Excerpts of Daughter of The Dark are available online.

Readers are also invited to check out Louise’s website or email her. 


Cherie Murphy has been a member of the RWA for five years and is the 2002 Romantic Book of the Year (mainstream) coordinator. Raised in Roma, Queensland, she has worked as a journalist for her local newspaper for seven years and is currently writing her own fantasy trilogy.

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